假如你是一位来自美国的留学生TOM,请你写一封给你在美国的好朋友JIM,告诉他你在中国的情况 词数60左右Dear Tom,
Long time no see! How are you? 好久不见！你怎么样了？
I am studying in *** school in China this year. 我现在在中国某某学校学习
I met many new friends here.我在这里交到了很多新朋友。
And we always play basketball together after class.而且在课后我们总在一起打篮球。
I find it is hard to study in Chinese.我发现用中文学习很难。
But luckily my teacher is strict. 不过幸运的是我的老师很严格。
And my classmates also help me a lot.而且我的同学们也帮了我很多忙。
Look forward to see your reply.
期待你的回信。
Best wishes,
Tom
纯手打，有什么觉得不合适的地方就再问我吧，用的都是很基础的词汇了，固定搭配啊用法什么的也没有错误
另外我想提醒一下 楼上的 excited拼错了 classmate也拼错了 不知道是不是笔误
It's Li hua your penpal, how are you?
I heard that you are going to come to study in Beijing, I am so glad for you. Welcome to China!
The new semester starts in September, it's summer in Beijing. Like the weather in Chicago , Beijing has distinct four seasons in a year. It could be very hot in the summer time and very cold in the winter, but don't worry, all the buidings in Beijing have the built-in heating system, it'll be warm and cozy in the room during the winter time.
And there is another great thing about being in Beijing is that you can find almost any kind of food here, French, Korean, or Japanese... you name it! But talking about being in China, of course the best choice would be the authentic Chinese food. I bet you know about the famous Beijing Duck, let's go to try it together when you get here.
There is so much to say, that I could keep writing this letter for hours, but I prefer to talk to you when I see you here in Beijing.
Again, welcome to China!
Have a nice day Amy, and looking forward to seeing you in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua.
| Dear students, Linda, the exchange student in our class will go back to her own country. We are planning to have a good weekend with her, and we want to invite all of you to attend it. We will meet at the school gate at 8 O’clock this Saturday. Then we will go to Yizheng Musuem by taxi at fifteen past eight, where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng. After that we will go to Yangzi Park on foot. We can go boating there. At 12 O’clock we will have lunch at KFC. In the afternoon, we will go shopping on Walking Street on foot. At half past 4, we will go back to school by bus and then go home by bike. Everyone should remember to take 100 yuan to attend this activity. Yours, Lily |
| 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，让我们根据所给材料写一封邀请信，邀请全班同学参加一个活动，和Linda 一起度过一个周末。材料中有详细的时间及活动安排，我们要用正确的时态按照时间顺序把这一天的行程表达清楚。通过分析可知，本篇短文应主要用一般将来时，第一人称复数表达。写作时注意行文连贯，表达清楚，不要遗漏要点。并且多使用好的短语和句型以使文章流畅。 【亮点说明】这篇作文写得比较清楚，详细，对材料中的时间及活动安排表达的很清楚，并且按时间顺序交代了这一天的行程。写作的人称和时态都切合题意。并且文中也用了一些较好的句型，如where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng、 go boating 、go shopping、 Everyone should remember to take等。这些句型的使用使文章流畅，富有条理。 |
亲爱的留学生同学们，我们刚刚成立了美式橄榄球队，这正是展现你们才华和风采的机会。等你报名参加吧！ 这里有你的一席之地。你将成为万众瞩目的明星。一份关于写给留学生的感谢英文信英文书信中的表示感谢
As soon as I opened your package, I felt that I must sit right down and tell you...
一打开您寄来的包裹，就觉得应该立即写信致谢。
I just wish you could have seen ...
我愿您知道……
You were kind to send a gift ...
承蒙好意，送来礼品……
Your lovely gift came this morning(was waiting for us when)...
厚礼于今早收到（当……，厚礼正等我们去拿）
Expected gifts are a pleasure to receive, but unexpected remembrances are an even greater joy.
意中之礼物果然可喜，而意外中之礼物更使人喜出望外。
You couldn't have given me anything that I wanted (would enjoy) more.
再没有比您的礼物更为我所想要的了。（更能使我喜欢了）求助我给我外国朋友写信Dear students,
First of all, allow me, on behalf of the leaders of our school teachers and students are warmly welcome to come to you, welcome to our school and life.
Campus life is different in different countries, in order to make your life more comfortable, the following I will describe some of the proposals in my school life.
First of all, cannot call the teacher's name in China, because China is a ritual of ceremony, Chinese used to call the expression of respect for teachers.
Secondly, I hope you cherish the time studying in China, take the initiative to increase opportunities for interaction with Chinese people, so that both can improve your Chinese language level, can understand Chinese culture.
Finally, if you encounter difficulty in living and learning, to communicate with us in a timely manner.Wishes you to study abroad in China live in interesting times!
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